vox nihili

Prepare to be un-amazed. I have never seriously pursued photography...but anyway. Here's my crit: I love the background. The river/sound/inlet and the structures/trees on its banks lend a tremendous a

I have Tourette's Syndrome, ( I don't curse uncontrollably, that's an extremely rare tic when I wrote this poem, my symptoms were much milder than they are today...now I do ...

I wrote a poem called 'A Monster, A Fiend,;' which I almost titled the same thing as this. Weird? ;) Anyway, I also wondered if you were talking about OCD... ...

Here's a few: *guy with big muscles but not much in the way of brains *giggly guys (hang with the girls and seem to be dating several at a time) ...

Okay. I can help a little with the overdose symptoms, and such...but be forewarned, this info comes from similar sources to webMD. But it's Voxina's paraphrased version... lots and lots ...

They could easily break some of the bones in their hands if they landed with their hands underneath themselves. Finger bones are the most likely, in medical terms, phalanges. Ankles ...

Very good. It's a delightful poem, very uplifting. Here's one tip: it wants punctuation. Try a few commas, semicolons, anything. You have good taste as to where the full stops ...

Bravo! You just explained to an idiot who has never, ever read whatever it is you are talking about what a twisted wretch this Iago person is. Never read it, ...

Woow. I was kind of confused in the middle, but at the end, wow. Such a bang. You really have a knack for the tear-drop type of tragic irony. Please, ...

I couldn't find anything at all wrong with the first stanza-it was immaculate! But the rest--eh, there were a few little fussy things. Here it is with the changes I'd ...

Name: Ives Clemson Age: she won't tell anyone, but she's really just fourteen. Gender: female Personality: very quiet, seemingly sour. Tends to make seemingly random noises, but none of it ...

Since others have said everything else including what I'm about to say, I guess I'm just backing up their statements, but... I loved it. The whole suspense, the sort of ...

wow! I so totally get it, the story. tip: insert apostrophes into all contractions. That would be about all I can fish up on technical stuff. language tip: find a ...

I was going to try and find something very finicky to pick at, but msomeye beat me to it. I'll instead say this: It could stand alone easily, because I ...

I really need some help on this... *sighs* no reviews yet. But at least a few people have looked at it... It's not even that long, either...